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Stage 1
Identify Desired Results


Catchy Title: Why Oh Why, Nellie Bly?
Theme/Topic of Lesson: Nellie Bly and Writing an Article for the School Newspaper
Time Commitment: Three 45-minute periods
Subject Area(s):
    Language Arts
Grade Level(s): 4,5,6
Standards Alignment:
Class Challenge Question: Why did Nellie Bly do all the daring things she did just to
get a story for the newspaper? 

Overview:

"Why oh Why…Nellie Bly?" would probably be the question most asked when people in
1885 first heard of Nellie Bly.  In the late 1800s, there were few career women, and a
woman in the newsroom of a large newspaper was totally against all standards of the
time!  Nellie Bly went to great lengths to report on the suffering and inhumane treatment
of people.  She always strived to report the truth and when she went after a story, she
placed herself directly in the situation to get the information straight from the people
involved.  If it meant committing herself to an insane asylum or working in a sweat
factory, Bly put herself right in with the people or situation on which she was reporting. 
She was very concerned on the plight of the treatment of people in society who were in
mental hospitals, prisons or factories known as sweatshops.  This determination and
caring gained her a place in society as an outstanding writer.

Students will gain knowledge of life back in the 1800's by going on a virtual field trip. 
Students will then gain knowledge of Nellie Bly by completing a Web based Scavenger
Hunt.  This teacher-directed research will use several Internet resources.  Students will
work in pairs to complete the worksheet.  The students will then venture into the world of
newspapers.  They will gain knowledge of the different sections of a newspaper and will
complete a letter of persuasion to the teacher or principal concerning some procedure or
activity at school that they feel needs a change.  All areas of curriculum can be integrated
in the process of writing articles and it can be of high interest to students to help get them
involved in writing.  All Multiple Intelligences could be covered.   Those students with
special needs, to be involved successfully in the publication, could dictate stories to other
students (entitled Typists) to type.  Students will discuss the different parts of the
newspaper.  Their prior knowledge of Nellie Bly will remind them that she started in the
newspaper business by responding to an editorial.  After examining the sections of the
newspaper, the students will review the writing process by writing a persuasive letter to
the principal concerning a problem or concern they have about school.  Students need a
working knowledge of retrieving sites, which have previously been bookmarked by the
teacher, and navigating around the site for the Scavenger Hunt.  Students will need to
have knowledge Microsoft Word for writing their letter.  Teachers should pair students
into groups of two for research and Web based activities so that at least one member of
the pair is comfortable with the computer and Internet.  Each of these groups will require
one computer available with Internet capabilities. Teachers need prior knowledge of
creating bookmarks and showing students how to access these. 



Stage 2
Determine Acceptable Evidence


Writing
(K-12)
Maryland Content Standards Indicators
Students produce informational, practical, persuasive, and narrative writing that demonstrates an awareness of audience, purpose and form using stages of the writing process as needed (i.e., pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and publishing).
 
Writing
(4-5)
Maryland Content Standards
Students produce informational, practical, persuasive, and narrative writing that demonstrates an awareness of audience, purpose and form using stages of the writing process as needed (i.e., pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and publishing).
Maryland State Indicators
3.5.1.3
connect relevant descriptions, including sensory details, personal experiences, observations, and/or research-based information, linking paragraphs and ideas in ways that make a topic or message clear to the reader (MLO.W. 1.3., MLO.W. 2.3., MLO.W. 3.3.)
Writing
(4-5)
Maryland Content Standards
Students produce informational, practical, persuasive, and narrative writing that demonstrates an awareness of audience, purpose and form using stages of the writing process as needed (i.e., pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and publishing).
Maryland State Indicators
3.5.1.2
create a clear organizing structure that includes descriptions placed in a logical, chronological, or narrative sequence in ways that help the reader follow the line of thought (MLO.W. 1.2., MLO.W. 2.2., MLO.W. 3.2.)
Writing
(4-5)
Maryland Content Standards
Students produce informational, practical, persuasive, and narrative writing that demonstrates an awareness of audience, purpose and form using stages of the writing process as needed (i.e., pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and publishing).
Maryland State Indicators
3.5.6.2
write information reports for an intended audience and purpose that
  • frame a key question
  • present a literal understanding of the topic
  • include facts and details that illuminate the main idea (MLO.W. 1.7.)
  • Writing
    (4-5)
    Maryland Content Standards
    Students produce informational, practical, persuasive, and narrative writing that demonstrates an awareness of audience, purpose and form using stages of the writing process as needed (i.e., pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and publishing).
    Maryland State Indicators
    3.5.7.1
    write to persuade an intended audience by selecting an appropriate form that
  • establishes a clear position in support of a proposition or proposal
  • supports the position with organized and relevant evidence (MLO.W. 2.6.)
  • Writing
    (4-5)
    Maryland Content Standards
    Students produce informational, practical, persuasive, and narrative writing that demonstrates an awareness of audience, purpose and form using stages of the writing process as needed (i.e., pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and publishing).
    Maryland State Indicators
    3.5.1.1
    create a paragraph that guides and informs the reader's understanding of key ideas and evidence and that presents effective introductory and concluding sentences, logical sequencing of ideas and transitional words (MLO.W. 1.1., MLO.W. 2.1., MLO.W. 3.1.)
    Reading
    (K-12)
    Maryland Content Standards Indicators
    Students examine, construct and extend the meaning of a variety of self-selected and assigned text (traditional and electronic) by applying a range of reading strategies and analytic techniques.
     
    Reading
    (4-5)
    Maryland Content Standards
    Students examine, construct and extend the meaning of a variety of self-selected and assigned text (traditional and electronic) by applying a range of reading strategies and analytic techniques.
    Maryland State Indicators
    1.5.6.4
    evaluate the usefulness of information (MLO.R. 2.3.3.)
    Technology productivity tools
    (Gr. 3-5)
    ISTE Technology Standards

    3. Technology productivity tools

    • Students use technology tools to enhance learning, increase productivity, and promote creativity.
    • Students use productivity tools to collaborate in constructing technology-enhanced models, prepare publications, and produce other creative works.
    ISTE Technology Performance Indicators
    Use technology tools

    Use technology tools (e.g., multimedia authoring, presentation, Web tools, digital cameras, scanners) for individual and collaborative writing, communication, and publishing activities to create knowledge products for audiences inside and outside the classroom.

    Technology communication tools
    (Gr. 3-5)
    ISTE Technology Standards

    4. Technology communication tools

    • Students use telecommunications to collaborate, publish, and interact with peers, experts, and other audiences.
    • Students use a variety of media and formats to communicate information and ideas effectively to multiple audiences.
    ISTE Technology Performance Indicators
    Use technology tools

    Use technology tools (e.g., multimedia authoring, presentation, Web tools, digital cameras, scanners) for individual and collaborative writing, communication, and publishing activities to create knowledge products for audiences inside and outside the classroom.



    Learning Objectives:

    The Students will:
    • Read to be informed through an Internet-based activity.
    • Complete a Web-based activity.
    • Write a "to persuade" or "to inform" newspaper article to the editor of the
      newspaper (the principal).

    Assessment
    Student performance will be evaluated by group observations and graded assignments,
    Old Sturbridge Village and Nellie Bly…On the Sly. A Performance Task List will be used
    to assess their progress and grasp of subject knowledge.


    Stage 3
    Plan Learning Experiences


    Resources

    Other TechnologyProjector SMARTboard, projection screen, large monitor, or a wall to allow for large
    projection of the computer.
    SoftwareMS Word
      http://www.microsoft.com
    Print MaterialsNELLIE BLY: First Woman of the News Lisker, Tom, illustrated by
    Jeffrey Lindberg, Contemporary Perspectives, Inc, c1978
    Nellie Bly's book: Around the World in 72 Days Bly, Nellie, 1864-1922; edited by Ira Peck, Brookfield, CN: Twenty-First Century Books, c1998
    Around the World With Nellie Bly Hahn, Emily:  illustrated by B. Holmes; Boston: Houghton Mifflin Co.,1959
    Stop the Presses, Nellie's Got a Scoop!; a story of Quacken, Robert M.;  New York: Simon & Schuster Books
    for Young Readers, c1992
    Internet SitesNational Teacher Training Institute All 2002 NTTI Institute lesson plans, resources, and links can be
    accessed at this site. Links to the national WNET/Thirteen NTTI
    site and lesson plans from past institutes are also available.
      http://www.mpt.org/learningworks/teachers/ntti/home.shtml
    NTTI Electronic Learning Community  This Electronic Learning Community is the gateway to online
    resources, a discussion board, virtual chat and loads of links.  The
    programming for this ELC is designed by the Center for
    Technology in Education, The Johns Hopkins University.
      http://cte.jhu.edu/ELC/
    Technology Toolbox This informative site explains the many Internet projects available  
    on the WWW, including many links. MPT staff compiles this site.
      http://www.mpt.org/learningworks/teachers/present/tech/index.html
    Teaching History Online A summary of Nellie Bly's life and several excerpts from her book
    concerning the time she committed herself to an insane asylum.
      http://www.spartacus.schoolnet.co.uk/USAWbly.htm
    Nellie Bly, Daredevil Reporter (Scholastic) A synopsis of Nellie Bly's life adapted from Junior Scholastic, March 1995.
      http://teacher.scholastic.com/researchtools/articlearchives/womhst/
    Library of Congress, Jump Back In Time, Progressive Era Along with a brief story of Nellie Bly, you can see a time line from 1860-1960 to better understand the era.
      http://www.americaslibrary.gov/cgi-bin/page.cgi/jb/progress
    Library of Congress This site shows a copy of poster from the early 1900's advertising
    all of Nellie's firsts.
      http://www.pressroom.com/~fiske/nellie1st.html
    Old Sturbridge Village This site, created by the living history village Old Sturbridge Village in Sturbridge, Massachusetts, offers a virtual tour of houses, shops, and farms, with detailed information and an
    interactive map. The site also has a section of frequently asked questions about aspects of daily life answered by the museum's researcher and historian.
      http://www.osv.org/
    University of New York, College of Staten Island Library College Analytical Essays - On American Women's Autobiographies, by
    Catherine Lavender, PhD, History Department
      http://www.library.csi.cuny.edu/dept/history/lavender/386/nbly.ht
    Spartacus Educational This site contains online history lessons, history timelines, and more.  The above URL leads you directly to an article on Nellie Bly.
      http://www.spartacus.schoolnet.co.uk/USAWbly.htm
    Scholastic Teachers
      http://teacher.scholastic.com/researchtools/articlearchives/womhst/
    America's Story from America's Library This is a wonderful site that not only has history stories but a time line showing other things that were happening in history at the same time as the event on which they are reporting.  This URL will take you directly to the story Nellie Bly Circled the Globe.
      http://www.americaslibrary.gov/cgi-bin/page.cgi/jb/progress/bly_1

    Materials
    Per class
    • Chart paper divided into KWL sections. 
      What I think I KNOW
      What I WANT to know
       What I  LEARNED 
    • Teacher's computer with Internet connection and the capability to connect
      to one of the devices mentioned above
    • A timer
    as determined by instructor
    • Jobs  (View)
    • Nelly Bly on the Sly  (View)
    • Several different types of city, county, and community newspapers, each
      group of 2 students should have their own    
    Per Student
    • Exploring a Newspaper  (View)
    • Life In The 1800's  (View)
    • Partner Check Sheet  (View)
    • Revisions  (View)
    • Square Writing  (View)
    • Team Evaluation  (View)
    • Team Rubric  (View)
    • TEAM  (View)
    • Writing Prompt  (View)
    • a piece of oaktag, 8.5" by 11" folded in half so that the card can stand like
      a tent with the one of the following terms Computer Researcher and
      Reporter pasted one on each side of the tent

    Vocabulary
    • Characteristic - a feature or quality that makes somebody or something recognizable
    • Virtual Field Trip - an electronic visit to sites on the Internet
    • By-line - a line at the head of a newspaper or magazine article carrying the writer's name.
    • Column - (1) the narrow, vertical sections of printed words in a newspaper; (2) newspaper features that are written and released by the same writer (columnist)
    • Dateline - the first line in an article that tells the place where the article originated
    • Dealine - the time which all stories are due
    • Edit - to correct and organized an article to be ready for publication
    • Editor - the person who reviews all stories submitted by the reporters and decides what stories will be published in a newspaper
    • Editorial - an article that expresses personal viewpoint or opinion written by the editor
    • Illustration - a drawing used to tell a story or clarify an idea
    • Index - table of contents for the newspaper usually found on the front page
    • T.E.A.M. - acronym for Together Everyone Achieves More

    Procedures
    In this lesson, the students will be involved in a class activity that will guide them to read
    for information and complete a teacher-guided worksheet. A computer projected virtual
    fieldtrip to a colonial village located in New England will be lead by the teacher.  The
    teacher will divide the class into groups of two students each.  Here the teacher can group
    students together according to special needs.  Some students need a strong partner to help
    them keep on task.  Other students may have difficulties writing, but are able to navigate
    around a site.  Students who are not comfortable with the computer may gain knowledge
    while watching their partner.  It is important to stress that teamwork is very important for
    a common grade goes to the team.  Teachers should take into account strong personalities
    to help assure success.  The students will read their job responsibilities.  They will
    complete a Web based assignment that will be timed. 
    1: An Introduction to Nellie Bly, First Woman of the News
    Daily Challenge Question: Why do you think someone would take on challenges that not only went against what society believed in the mid-1800's, but also put themselves in danger just to write a story for a newspaper?

    Set-up Directions:

    The teacher should bookmark the site: Old SturbridgeVillage http://www.osv.org/, on a
    computer that is connected to a projection device.   A copy of Life in the 1800's , Nellie
    Bly?On the Sly, and Team Evaluation is given to each student.   Job description cards
    should be placed on each side of the student computers so that they know who is assigned
    as a Computer Researcher and who is assigned as a Reporter.  Each computer should be
    shared by two students with room enough for the Reporter to write.  If room is not
    available, then students could use a clipboard on which to write.  The worksheet entitled
    Team #3 should be pasted on the front cover of a manila folder.  This folder should be
    placed over the screen of the computer so that student attention is towards the teacher's
    computer for the first activity.  The term TEAM will be discussed and then the folder will
    be removed from the computers for the teams to do their research and reporting.
    The teacher should use Internet Explorer as the browser and have the site bookmarked
    before class begins.  The teacher will model opening a bookmarked site and how to
    navigate to find answers to questions on the handout.  The teacher could have this
    worksheet open in the background and multi-task to complete answers while students
    write them on their own sheet.

    The teacher should prepare the Day 1, Worksheet #3 Jobs, 1 copy per team of 2,  a piece
    of oaktag, 8.5" by 11",  per student that has been folded in half so that the card can stand
    like a tent.  Paste one job description on each folded card, on the outside so the student
    can read it.  Place the cards so that the Computer Researcher is placed on the left of the
    computer and the Reporter is on the right side.

    The teacher should have the following links bookmarked on each student computer:

    University of New York, College of Staten Island Library College of Staten Island City
    http://www.library.csi.cuny.edu/dept/history/lavender/386/nbly.html
    Teaching History Online
    http://www.spartacus.schoolnet.co.uk/USAWbly.htm
    Scholastic Teachers
    http://teacher.scholastic.com/researchtools/articlearchives/womhst/nellie.htm
    America's Story from America's Library
    http://www.americaslibrary.gov/pages/jb_0125_bly_1.html
    Library of Congress
    http://www.pressroom.com/~fiske/nellie1st.html  



    Teacher Presentation & Motivation:
    Teacher says,  "Today I will have you travel back in time to the 1800's.  What do you
    think life was like, 150 years ago?"   Teacher should have a piece of chart paper divided
    into KWL sections.  Ask the students for their ideas and write their responses on a KWL
    chart.
    What I think I KNOW
    What I WANT to know
    What I LEARNED   
    The teacher will chart the answers the students give under the appropriate heading.

    Activity 1 - A Virtual Fieldtrip to the 1800s
    Students take a virtual fieldtrip to the 1800s
    Focus for Media Interaction
    Focus for Media Interaction: The focus for media interaction is a specific task to complete and/or information to identify during or after viewing of video segments, Web sites or other multimedia elements.

    The focus for media interaction is to research life in the 1800's, by taking a
    virtual field trip.

    Teacher says,  "You will be reading to be informed about life in the 1800's.  To aid you
    in the understanding of how life was, compared to ours today, you will be going on a
    virtual field trip to a museum and looking for the different way of handling the various
    items listed in the chart.  I have already divided you into groups of two.  I have placed
    two job description cards (hand-out titled Jobs) on each side of the keyboard.  The card
    that is in front of you will be your job for today's second activity.  I will model both jobs
    during our virtual field trip."

    The teacher will pass out worksheet, Life in the 1800's, to each student.  They need to
    write both their name and their partner's name.  The teacher will have the students place
    the team folder over the screen of the their laptop or monitors and then direct the them to
    focus on the teacher's computer screen and the Web site Old Sturbridge Village at
    http://www.osv.org/.  (If a SMARTboard or electronic whiteboard is available, the
    students could come to the front and underline or highlight answers as they find them. 
    The other students will write the answer on their worksheet.)  The students will follow
    along and complete the sheet along with the other students in the class.
    After demonstrating to the students how to access a bookmarked site and when the site
    has opened, the teacher should click on Tour the Village.  You will see a map where you
    can click on the various buildings listed on the handout.  As the students find the answers,
    the teacher will call on them to recite the answer and where they found it.
    For example:  In the 2000's there are career women, and the information found at the
    Fenno House showed that in the 1800's women were only found in the home.  They did
    not have jobs outside the home.

    The teacher should monitor the students as they complete the task and ask periodically
    for different students to report various differences between life in the 1800s compared
    today.

    After completing the activity, the teacher should review the jobs that have been assigned. 
    Here is a good time to get the students up from sitting so long.  Have the Researchers
    stand and go over the responsibilities of their job as written on the card. Then ask the
    Reporters to stand and go over their responsibilities.



    Activity 2 - Web-Based Scavanger Hunt on Nellie Bly's Life
    Students engage in an internet scavanger hunt
    Focus for Media Interaction
    Focus for Media Interaction: The focus for media interaction is a specific task to complete and/or information to identify during or after viewing of video segments, Web sites or other multimedia elements.

    To provide students with a specific task to complete while viewing, the
    focus for media interaction is to have students discover aspects of Nellie
    Bly's life by completing a web based scavenger hunt.

    After the class has completed their virtual field trip, the teacher will say,  "From our
    virtual field trip, you have gained the understanding that women were expected to stay at
    home to clean, cook, and rear children.  As you complete the next activity, which is a
    Web based Scavenger Hunt, you will learn about a very daring lady.  You will see that
    Nellie Bly, one of 15 children in her family, grew up with very different beliefs and
    expectations for herself.  Today you will be using this Web based Scavenger Hunt to gain
    knowledge of this woman's life and her impact on society.  Remember to stay with the
    job to which you were assigned.  You will have 20 minutes to complete the assignment."

     Ask for any questions before they begin.  Be sure to navigate yourself around the room
    so that you will be able to help any novice computer researcher.

    After 15 minutes, the REPORTERS will share answers to the class as the teacher reviews
    the worksheet. Discuss any discrepancies. 



    Activity 3 - Culminating Activity
    Students will write a summary statement about the similarities and differences of the
    women of the 1800s and the women of the 2000s.  Each detail must be supported by a
    fact from the worksheet or the Internet.

    Wrap Up:
    As a closing activity, the Team Evaluation sheet will be distributed and completed before
    the end of class.  Students should make an honest assessment of their involvement with
    their partner in today's activities. (5 min)
    2: A Letter to the Editor (principal or classroom teacher)
    Daily Challenge Question: What would you like to see changed at school? Do you think that if you wrote a persuasive letter to the principal that he might consider your request?

    Set-up Directions:
    The teacher needs to have different types of newspapers for each pair of students. (Local
    city, county, state national)  One copy of Exploring A Newspaper, the Writing Prompt,
    and 4 Square Writing needs to be prepared for each student. If available, Inspiration
    should be open on the teacher's computer with an LCD project.

    Teacher Presentation & Motivation:

    The teacher will tell the students that they are going to investigate newspapers as they
    continue their unit on Nellie Bly.  The teacher should introduce the vocabulary words by
    writing them on the blackboard or chart.

    Say:  "Yesterday we learned about Nellie Bly (Elizabeth Jane Cochrane), a woman
    journalist, who revolutionized the role of women reporters. From traveling around the
    world in 72 days, committing herself to Blackwell's Island to expose mistreatment of
    people with mental illness, her writings still inspire authors.  Nellie Bly was a pioneer of
    investigative journalism." 

    Say:  "As you complete the today's activities about newspapers and work through the
    enrichments, you will be working through the process of writing while producing articles
    that will be included in a classroom newspaper."
    The teacher asks the following questions:
    "With a show of hands, how many of you read a newspaper or perhaps just parts of a
    newspaper?"  Students will show results by raising their hands. "What parts have you
    read?"  Students will brain storm and the teacher will use the software Inspiration to
    create a graphic organizer utilizing the Rapidfire tool. If this software is not available, the
    teacher will write these on the board or chart paper.

    The teacher should then tell the students, "Now, we'll really look at different newspapers
    and identify many more sections of the newspaper." The teacher will distribute different
    types of newspapers to each pair of students. (Local city, county, state national)  After the
    students review the newspaper, they will complete the worksheet Exploring A Newspaper
    where they will explore the different section that newspaper. 

    After 5 minutes, the teachers will distribute another type of newspaper for the students to
    compare on their chart.

    The teacher will ask for a summary of the kind of newspaper by having students retell
    information from their worksheet.  

    The teacher will ask:  "Which section of the newspaper did Nellie Bly write to that
    eventually gained her entrance to the newspaper office that was forbidden to women up
    to that time?" (The students should respond with editorial or Letters to the Editor)
    The teacher says: "Do you remember what was written by the editor that made Nellie so
    angry that she wrote her letter to the editor?"  (The students should respond with the idea
    that women were only good for housework and taking care of children.)  
    The teacher will say: "Do you think Nellie would have been granted an interview if the
    editor had know she was a lady?"  (The response should be that women were not allowed
    in the press room, so therefore if the editor knew she was a woman, he would not have
    invited her for an interview."



    Activity 1 - Writing Prompt for Writing to Persuade or Writing to Express a Personal Opinion

    The teacher should distribute the Writing Prompt sheet to the students. The teacher says: 
    "Today I'd like you to put yourself in Nellie Bly's place of telling the editor what you
    think about a certain topic. We will be using the writing form of Writing to Persuade. 
    Read along silently as I read the writing prompt and the think abouts. You will be writing
    the First Draft of your Persuasive Letter."

    After the students have reviewed the writing prompt, the teacher will say:  "Are there any
    questions before we begin to write our rough draft?  I will direct your attention to our 4
    square writing posters. (These are printed as a handout so that teachers may reproduce the
    information in any form they desire).  The teacher will explain the different parts.

    The teacher will remind the students to begin with a very good beginning sentence that
    states exactly what they feel needs to be changed in school.  Then, they can use the 4
    Square Writing Poster or the 4 Square Writing handout to help them.  This reminds them
    to use four good paragraphs before restating the purpose for the letter  (what they feel
    needs to be changed).  The student can choose one word from each column to help guide
    them into their paragraphs.  Remind them that they choose only one.

    The students should now write their letters.  Remind them to go back to their prompt
    frequently.



    Activity 2 - Culminating Activity

    The teacher will give the students the last 5 minutes to bring their letter to a close by
    reviewing:
    1. Do I have an interesting beginning that firmly states what I want to say?
    2. Have I supported my belief with concrete reasons or examples?
    3. Did I restate my belief or desire again in the last paragraph?
    4. Did I stick to the one point I wanted to make or did I talk about more than one?
    5. Do I sound like I am begging or pleading instead of firmly giving facts to support
    my request?

    Students will place their rough draft in a folder.



    Wrap Up:
    Students may share some of the topics they have chosen for their letters to the editor.
    3: My Letter to the "Editor" (pen name for my Principal)
    Daily Challenge Question: How can I be sure I'm ready for publication?

    Set-up Directions:
    The teacher needs to reproduce copies of the Revisions worksheet for each student.
    The teacher explains that this is the worksheet that will help them revise their work and
    get it ready for publication.  The top part is for the student to help edit their work.  The
    other handout is a Partner 2 Partner worksheet that consists of 2 pages.  It is best to print
    these back to back. The students will have time to make any changes to the rough draft
    using the Revisions handout and then they have time to help their partner make further
    revisions. The teacher should have a copy of the Team Rubric ready for each student, as
    well.

    Teacher Presentation & Motivation:
    The teacher says:  "When a writer submits an article or editorial to the newspaper, it
    needs to be in the best shape possible. We are going to work on revising the letters to the
    editor we wrote yesterday to help get it in the best shape and then have someone else look
    it over for us and help us make it clear to readers."

    Activity 1 - Revising the Letter

    Pass out the Revisions handout to each student. The teacher says; "Today you are going
    to work with a 'MESS'. Look at the Revisions worksheet." The students will review the
    Revisions handout.  They will be given 15 minutes to make any changes to their rough
    draft.  The teacher will then distribute the Partner 2 Partner worksheet to each student. 
    The teacher should number the partners as one and two.  The number one student will
    answer each of the questions under the column of author. (5 minutes)  They will then
    hand the rough draft and their Partner 2 Partner sheet to their assigned partner number
    two.  After reading the draft, the partner will answer the questions under the column
    Partner.  The partner will complete the back of the sheet with Praise, Question, Polish. 
    The partner has to decide if any of the questions below need to be asked.  Encourage the
    students to write questions if they truly don't understand a part of the letter.  Remind
    them that these are just suggestions and they are not to write every question.

    The first student is handed their writing and Partner 2 Partner sheet.  After going over any
    suggestions from the sheet, they are given 5 minutes to make any changes.



    Activity 2 - Getting Ready for Publication
    The students are given an opportunity to either type their letter on the computer or by pen
    and paper.

    Wrap Up:

    Students assess their work by using the Team Rubric. The teacher assesses the final
    letters and cooperative interaction during the lesson.

    The students may choose to read their completed letters to the principal.  These letters
    could be given to the principal.  Perhaps you could plan a visit from the principal as a
    follow-up to give them a chance to address these concerns and to hopefully praise them
    for a great persuasive letter.



    Enrichment Options
    Community Connection
    Invite the editor of the community newspaper to visit your class and help the students
    organize a class or school newspaper.

    Parent-Home Connection
    Web sites – If your school has a Web site, ask if your class could have a school news
    section that the students could write for or even submit poems or stories they have
    written. If your school does not have a Web site, checkout some of the sites below to
    create one just for your class:
    AOL Homeotwn, 1-2-3 Publich at http://publish.hometown.aol.com/ (Need an AOL
    account.)
    Tripod at http://www.tripod.lycos.com/   (Tripod FREE – Choice of ads, 20 MB   
    space, 1 GB of Bandwidth)

    Field Experiences
    Students can see first hand the importance of a spreading the news by taking a field
    trip to a newspaper or radio station. 
    -Guest Speaker:
    Survey the students in your school for any parents who might work for a newspaper,
    radio, or television station and invite them to the school to talk with the students.

    Cross-Curricular Extensions
    All of the following subject areas could be integrated by having the students create
    articles for publication into a classroom or school newspaper.
    -Language Arts
    Poems, riddles, stories
    -Fine Arts
    Reviews of movies, a listing of upcoming events, a listing of contacts for students
    new to the area to become involved in scouts, sports, or community clubs, places
    of interest where students can go on weekends, Internet sites
    -Mathematics
    Math problems for students to solve and submit the answer to the newspaper, with
    those names printed in the following editions, mathematical riddles, Internet sites
    of where to receive help
    -Science
    Upcoming events at a local aquarium, science center, tips for science fair, Internet
    sites
    -Social Studies
    A study on local history, places of interest in the area for sightseeing
    -Technology
    Safe sites for anyone and everyone, from homework help, parent links



    Stage 4
    Teacher Reflection


    As a reflective practitioner, note how this lesson could be adjusted after its initial
    implementation. How successful were the students? What did the assessment demonstrate
    about the students' learning?  What skills do the students need to revisit?  What
    instructional strategies worked and what made them successful?  What will you change
    the next time you use this lesson?  Why? 

    Author: Wanda C. Dietrich
    Modified by: Shelly Munger
    Author's School System: Prince George's County Public Schools
    Author's School: Hyattsville Elementary